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Elephant

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Layered, laser cut plywood comission.  Approximate size is 210mm by 130mm by 20mm. 

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:star::star::star::star::star-empty: Overall
:star::star::star::star::star-empty: Vision
:star::star::star::star::star-empty: Originality
:star::star::star::star::star-half: Technique
:star::star::star::star-half::star-empty: Impact

I always enjoy to watch your work, and most of the time there is a nice balance in the work, created by the colours and the layers themselves.
This time, however, I noticed that it is a bit to much. It is all very beautiful made, and the wood seems to flow into eachother, but there seems to be too much. The elephant falls away in the sea of wood, plants, birds and fishes. I mis some sort of composition.
This however might perhaps be restablished by reconsidering the colours, and maybe use less of the white wood, do brighten up the elephant and a few details, while the rest can be toned done to some darker colours.

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